Artwork suggestion?

[nightfeathers]

Does the artist who does the pykiin play here? I was just studying on them and I noticed something. On the adult females, the mouths go really far back. Something had been nagging me about that and I just realised that was it. I was just thinking it might look better with a shorter mouth line like what the males have. I love how the males look. So very cuteness. :3 Anyway just thought Id throw that out there.

[Linaeve]

*waves* That would be me! And yes, there have been various points about anatomy and design that I'm not keen on, either. I agree with you, and at second glance I realised that it wouldn't be entirely too hard to fix, I just needed to erase a small portion of the lineart. How does this look?

((Will post later, Photobucket is being dumb >.< ))

I'm just at a stage in my artwork where I keep developing and every time I turn around to look back at my other pieces I realise that there's something there I don't want or that doesn't look right. Since I made the normal linearts about 6 months ago, I'm rather displeased with them now x3 My favorite, however, is the female adult Flitterkiin. I feel that I've captured a dynamic pose filled with life and energy, and the anatomy and movement of the mane and fur are almost perfect. I had a little help with that one, though Redlining saves me.

[nightfeathers]

Oh you're the one who does them? Well bravo to you then. *pets* Cant see the pic obviously but I think that'd probably do the trick. The mouth itself is positioned well, just a bit long. I imagine a small bit of erasing would do perfectly.

I know what you mean. I went through that stage myself not long ago. I ended up totally revamping my own adoptables. I added animation too, and I am much happier with how they are now.

Did some research and I managed to find a pic of a flitter female. I agree, she looks awesome. Very nice! And hey if you need more redlining you can always ask me. In lineart at least your style looks similar to mine so maybe I can help.

BTW... *grabs Davey and Jack and runs...trips of bottle of rum*

[Linaeve]

Here we go ^^ I knew I'd do something like this, get sidetracked and not post for hours >.<



Thank you! I take pride in my adoptables, and my other art too of course! I doubt they'll ever look exactly how I imagined them, but hey, I love 'em anyways *snugs her pounce*

O.O No stealin' mah Davy! *chases with a hammer* Rawr!! Jack is actually Chelle's pykiin, so I would watch out for her next. >.>

[JadeAngel]

O.O;;;


**watches Peri run in and attempt to tackle NF**

"Daddy!" Peri cries after Jack.

[PonyMama]

Oooh I like the difference K13, I would never complain before, but I defintiely like the shorter mouth

[Raenia]

I do like it, though I would never have noticed anything not quite right on my own. Nice job NF and k13.

[nightfeathers]

Yeah, there ya go! *applauds*

I cant help it. I luff Jack. I have like 20 versions of him. X)

[JadeAngel]

lol, tis ok NF...that's why when i couldn't get him...i asked Chelle for a breed with him

[kumon]

hmm..I never noticed that it was long before.I like the new mouth,but really It doesn't bother me to much. Which ever mouth you decide to go with will be fine with me.*shrugs*

[sinsoo]

I don't really mind the mouth but if I had to choose I would choose the old one. =/

[Cameron]

I like the new mouth actually, but I have one question...



Are you going to go through and update all of the Females? I cirtianly hope not, for your sake not mine xD

[Linaeve]

Nuuuu, definately not O.O I think I would -die-.

I might replace the original template with the modified one and just keep going from there.

d00d, Mom just gave me a chunk of chocolate! Yays

[Cameron]

I was thinking you could do that I was just checking to make sure you weren't going to attemp suicide xD

Chocolate? Can I has a peice? X3

[PonyMama]

Yeah that would be a heck of a lot of work to change them all
I can imagine K13 falling into a coma