Advice and possible Red Line help

[chelle]

I was doodling again today which is a good thing since it had been awhile when I started again in Nov.

Anyways today at nap time I drew up a couple cats. And wanted some advice and possible red line help.

They were uploaded in greyscale because the pencil lines were too light in places, as such they may look a little messier then normal.

i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb183/Coalboy/Cats/cat.jpg (yes I know she's sitting crooked I haven't cleaned them up at all)
i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb183/Coalboy/Cats/cat1.jpg

[sinsoo]

For the first one you made the neck a bit to long.
And for the second one you should make the tail longer.
Those are just my opinions thou.

[Linaeve]

Sinsoo!! Jycius was talking about the quote in your sig just yesterday! Random.

</random> I'll stop hijacking threads now, sorry.

[sinsoo]

Kitty13- I read it in a book I have about children's ghost stories.. It's been in the kitchen for a llloooonnngg time so I was curious. XD