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Post by Raenia on Oct 19, 2007 16:12:01 GMT -5
 Here's the male. I was pretty happy with him, which is why I decided to try to make a female.  I am less than happy with her. Her legs just don't look right, but I couldn't figure out how to fix them. Advice/redlinging/comments/complaints welcome! |
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Post by PonyMama on Oct 19, 2007 16:17:28 GMT -5
Your front leg issue is:
that you shoudl not have so many bends.
There should be one joint at the Shoulder,
one at the elbow, then the last would be right at
the paw or hoof like a wrist.
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Post by Raenia on Oct 19, 2007 16:23:53 GMT -5
Wouldn't that make the leg bend the wrong way, though?
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Post by PonyMama on Oct 19, 2007 16:28:28 GMT -5
Nope
how many joints do you have?
You added an extra which is making it very bendy.
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Post by Raenia on Oct 19, 2007 16:37:09 GMT -5
Ok, I'll see if I can fix it. WHat about the back leg, is there anything you can suggest? The one in the foregroung looks ok, but the one in the back doesn't.
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Post by PonyMama on Oct 19, 2007 16:40:51 GMT -5
hold on let me play with it to show you a bit
And where is my head, they look wonderful Raenia, you did a great job on them
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Post by Raenia on Oct 19, 2007 16:47:50 GMT -5
Thank you, I was very surprised by how well they turned out. Don't tell, but *I drew them in my AP Chem notes.* I've been fascinated by Gryphons for as long as I cam remember, so they're about the only things I can draw with any kind of consistency.
I think I've got the front leg fixed, let me upload the pic.
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Post by PonyMama on Oct 19, 2007 16:58:46 GMT -5
 I got my hubby to fix it a bit, since I have never drawna gryphon |
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Post by Raenia on Oct 19, 2007 17:01:07 GMT -5
Ah, that looks very nice. So the back foot doesn't show at all?
It's a little hard to fix in paint without a tablet, so I'll probably have to print it out, fix it, and get Dad to scan it in again.
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Post by PonyMama on Oct 19, 2007 17:04:15 GMT -5
well his suggestion is to look at some nice big cats, as they have rather muscular legs, this would place the back leg hidden.
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Post by Raenia on Oct 19, 2007 17:13:13 GMT -5
I'll have to try that. His version certaintly looks good. Thanks for all the help.
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Post by PonyMama on Oct 19, 2007 17:23:13 GMT -5
No problem.
Glad I could help, I mean we could help
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Post by Raenia on Oct 19, 2007 17:28:01 GMT -5
So, other questions. Does anyone think they would make a good adoptable? Would you buy one? What do you like about them, what don't you like? Do you think the intro story I wrote goes well with them? (Intro can be found a few pages back in this forum, the thread is called Not Excactly Art, or something like that.)
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