Ok I need help and some suggestions.

[chelle]

I have been working on a set of lineart for... well since December. I thought I had it all finished but then I started coloring it and I don't like the way three of the pieces look anymore.

I am putting these all in links since the size might be any issue

first the one I still like the baby girl,
i157.photobucket.com/albums/t47/ALAdpt/Lineart/girlchild.jpg

colored

i157.photobucket.com/albums/t47/ALAdpt/Lineart/example.jpg

now the ones I have decided I don't like anymore

male child:
i157.photobucket.com/albums/t47/ALAdpt/Lineart/malechild.jpg

I think the back feet are off and the facial features are wonky The feet are supposed to be Big!

adult male
i157.photobucket.com/albums/t47/ALAdpt/Lineart/maleadult.jpg

I just don't like it

adult female
i157.photobucket.com/albums/t47/ALAdpt/Lineart/girladult.jpg

I like most of her and I want to keep her pose.

I think that once I try inking them I run into the problems. Meaning the more I do to them the less I like them.


Now for the big question are these even worth pursuing as an adoptable?

[PandaLover]

I think they are totally worth making into an adoptable! Oh, and if it does happen, make sure we know! I think they're really cute.

[chelle]

Thanks Panda.

[krissie1234uk25]

I like them, I would be curious to see them inked too. I love the big paws!

[Raenia]

I love them, and If you do make them an adoptable, I want one. I agree with your criticisms, but only if I'm looking for them.

[Farnley Kombu]

I really like them. I recomend for the male child making the head a bit bigger, the ears a different style and the tail a bit smaller. For the adult male maybe make the head a bit bigger and maybe doing sometihng else with the eyes. And for the adult female, if you don't like her, try angling her head differently.

The poses are all great though!

[chelle]

Oh lots of good things to work with.

[chelle]

ok this is a revised version of the female lineart comments??

[Farnley Kombu]

She looks a lot better after you raised the head! *pets the pretty*

[Raenia]

The furthest toe on her near front paw is kind of pointy, and her muzzle looks a little flat to me, but other than that, she looks great. I love her ears and the other three paws. He pose is great.

[chelle]

Ok I had noticed the toe but hadn't rounded it off oops ok so other then the muzzle which will take awhile if I do it anything else need reworking?

*purr* and snuggles Farnley.

[Farnley Kombu]

I do agree with Rae, the nose is a bit flat, but I think it looks really good right now

[chelle]

better? worse?

[Farnley Kombu]

That looks better! She looks so pretty! I like also how you curved the left eye lash

[chelle]

Ok one down and THANKS for all the help and suggestions

now I like the female child but I am posting her incase she needs any tweaking.



and just from looking at her I see I need to work on her claws. guess I need to figure out if the youthed are going to have claws or not.