I never stopped thinking

[Cameron]

Well, after the 4th I wrote a number of poems, some I'm totally proud of, and some that I think could use a ton of work.

I wanted to post a few and get some imput.

What I love about you

I love the way you looked at me,
Your eyes so bright and blue.
I love the way you kissed me,
Your lips so soft and smooth.

I love the way you made me so happy,
And the ways you showed you cared.
I love the way you said, "I Love You,"
And the way you were always there.

I love the way you touched me,
Always sending chills down my spine.
I love that you were with me,
And glad that you were mine.

I asked God
I asked God for a flower, he gave me a bouquet
I asked God for a minute, he gave me a day
I asked God for true love, he gave me that too
I asked for an angel and he gave me you.

[Cameron]

This one is really long So get ready to read.

Standing there at last minute

From the guys point of view
Standing there at last minute
Knowing if not said
It won’t ever be
Three words she’s dieing to hear
Standing there at last minute
But you are unable to speak
Though just met
You know it’s meant to be
Never feeling like this before
You hope and wish she feels the same
But Standing there at last minute
You find your self baffled
You can’t speak
You’re afraid of the consequences
She knows your thinking and wish to talk
But she also knows that it’s hard
Standing there at last minute
You realize how hard it is to finally say goodbye
Knowing for sure you’ll never see
Her shinning face is your dismay
You love her
Yes you do
Though you can’t convince yourself to let it out
Standing there at last minute
You know her heart is on a limb
You know she feels the same
The night before is what tells you so
Standing there at last minute
You remember her ever touch
You remember the feeling of her hand
And her fingers that fit perfectly in-between yours
You remember her every gasp
And that every time something horrible would happen she would look to you instead
Standing there at last minute
You want to say something you really do
But you’re unable to
You don’t want to hurt her
Not like you did her friend
Standing there at last minute
You wished it could have lasted for eternity
But standing there at last minute
You are still and always will be unable to say how you feel about the one you feel is yours


From the girls point of view
Standing there at last minute
He turns to you
But you don’t say a word
You feel he’s thinking
About none other than you
But standing there at last minute
You let him think
You allow him to stand
Not saying a word you pleadingly tell him to speak
But standing there at last minute
You feel it must not be meant to be
You’ve never felt like this before
You only wish to hear three words
The three you know that deep down inside he is thinking about
Standing there at last minute
You stare into his eyes
Hoping and praying he’ll read your thoughts
You want for him to speak
So badly you wish the words would fly
Standing there at last minute
You too realize that you’ll never see him again
And if you do it won’t be on purpose
You realize that there is none else that can fill that space
But standing there at last minute
Not one word leaves your lips
You remember how you fell for him
His kind words that spoke so softly
His eyes and gaze that knocked you off your feet
Standing there at last minute
You remember the night before
The way he made you laugh
Even though you were scared
The way he held your hand
It made you never want to let go
Standing there at last minute
You remember his strong hold
And the way he looked to you when you were scared
He needed not to say a word
And everything turned out to be fine
But standing there at last minute
You wished it could have lasted for eternity
And standing there at last minute
You are still and always will be unable to say how you feel about the one you feel is yours

[Farnley Kombu]

Wow, those are great Love the first one

[sinsoo]

I like them all just that the last two it got annoying to me when it kept repeating Standing there at last minute.

[Raenia]

The first one is my favorite. They're all really good.

[Cameron]

Thank you, Sinsoo, The point of the last one is to repeat that phrase, thats why its called a chant. xD

[sinsoo]

Yes but it's an annoying chant XD

[Farnley Kombu]

I like the chant, I think it's so cute :3

[Cameron]

LOL
Thank you. Annoying as it may be I'm still trying to make the whole thing rhyme. xD

And Farnley it really happened thats why I was able to write it so well, though its not as good as my other two.

[Farnley Kombu]

Heh, I used to write poems allllll of the time. But I guess I've just lost my "groove."

((Oh, trust me, I know what happened.))

[Cameron]

I don't know when I'm in a bad mood or I'm upset lines just come to me, and I go off of them.

It's more of one phrase comes to me and I just get this rush to complete the story line.

[Cameron]

New Poem...


Here without you I haven't slept a wink
Its what you did that has caused my mind to think

Nothing could have saved me from you look or every touch
So which is why deep down I miss you so very much

My freinds think I'm stupid for falling for such a simple boy
But I know that you are not ever going to be a silly toy

T've fallen in so deep its gotten harder to breathe
Which is why I cried when you said you had to leave

The rain; it has yet to let up since you went and left
Its depressing how you got away with my heart like a sneaky theft

Its not nearly the same with you not by my side
But the moments we shared kept me wanting more much like a ride

So these few words I hope you hold true
I will forever and always love you.